Date: 10/03/09 - 10:32 pm Title: Author's Notes
Not bad for your first finished fanfic. Some areas seemed a little rushed here and there which you'll learn to fix the more you write. I myself used to have the same problem rushing through a story, but I eventually learned how to make them flow fairly well after a while as I'm sure you will too. But overall it was a good read and you should keep on working on new stuff.
Date: 10/03/09 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter One
A tad violent there at the end, but hey, it had a point. That last fight was really intense, and I loved seeing were-Sonic in a decent fight with an equally vicious foe. Your ending is also interesting ... foreshadowing of plot twists to come? Keep writing! You showed a lot of improvement as the story progressed. Your next fics will be even better, and I look forward to seeing what happens next now that Sonic has the were-form in him.